Deer

So, here is an experiment of mine. There are so many great artists painting that way (or at least that is what I tried    ) and I thought I'd try it out. Not sure what to think of it. Somehow I like it...somehow it just didn't turn out the way I wanted. Maybe I'll continue working on it. At least my fiancé likes it
What do you think? Any suggestions? Would be glad for some feedback!